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The diagram below shows the water supply system in Australia at present and future

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The diagram illustrates the way the water supply system currently works in Australia and the plans for future changes. Overall, the main change in the future water supply system is based on recycling water for use in party. The current water supply ystem shows that the pure water is stored at a dam before being transferred to a city to be used by households, shops and factories. From the city, storm water is directed straight into the river whereas waste water is sent to the water treatment plant to be processed. After the waste eater is treated, it is safe to be released into the river. Regarding the future water supply diagram, it can be seen that the storage of pure water in the dam and the uses of it in the city are the same as the previous system. However, both the storm water and waste water from the city are to be directed to the water treatment plant for processing after which they will both be recycled back for use in the city. It is planned that no water will be released into the river.
The diagram illustrates the way the
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in party. The
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before
being transferred
to a city to be
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used
by households, shops and factories. From the city, storm
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is directed
straight into the river whereas waste
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is
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sent
to the
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treatment plant to
be processed
. After the waste eater
is treated
, it is safe to
be released
into the river.

Regarding the future
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diagram, it can be
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seen
that the storage of pure
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in the dam and the
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uses
of it in the city are the same as the previous system.
However
, both the storm
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and waste
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water
from the city are to
be directed
to the
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water
treatment plant for processing after which they will both
be recycled
back for
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use
in the city. It
is planned
that no
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will
be released
into the river.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the water supply system in Australia at present and future

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6.0
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