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the academic exam on the process of making ceramic pots.

the academic exam on the process of making ceramic pots. eOpO

The diagram outlines one particular way of creating ceramic pots. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that this chemical process can be grouped into three main stages: collecting the raw materials, forming those materials into pots, and finishing the process by heating and colouring them. The first stage of the process is to dig up and transport the raw materials to factories where they are then crushed and mixed with water to make them into a clay-like substance that can be molded into the shape of a pot. From there, they must dry for 4-6 hours in moulds in order to fix them into their final shape. They are then placed in an oven and heated to over 1000 degrees celsius. Following this, the pots are colored and a ‘firing’ stage in the oven sets the paint pigments in place, finalising the process.

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pots
. Looking from an overall
 perspective, it is readily
 apparent that this chemical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 can be grouped
 into three main stages: collecting the raw materials, forming those materials into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
, and finishing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 by heating and Possible spelling mistake found.coloringco louring
colouring
 them.

The first
 stage of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 is to dig up and transport the raw materials to factories where they are then crushed and mixed with water to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them into a clay-like substance that can be molded
 into the shape of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pot
. From there, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 dry for 4-6 hours in Possible spelling mistake. 'moulds' is British English.molds
moulds
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 them into their final shape.

They are then placed in an oven and heated to over 1000 degrees Possible spelling mistake found.Celsius
celsius
. Following this, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
are colored
 and a ‘firing’ stage in the oven sets the paint pigments in place, Possible spelling mistake. 'finalising' is British English.finalizing
finalising
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
. 