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The chart below shows the reason why people travel to work by bicycle or by car

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The illustrated pie diagram depicts the basis of why individuals go to job by bike or by automobiles. It can clearly be seen that Health and also less pollution has had the largest ratio towards the motivation moreover faster than driving has the lowest rate. Meanwhile, comfort being the highest part of the basis towards driving to work, both distance to work and faster than biking being the least. To begin with, the statistics covering the percentages of the biggest basis for biking to labor revels that human beings voted for Health and fitness plus less pollution for 30%. The persons struggle to park and the proportion was 15. Finally, the minimum quantities in this category are no expenditures and faster than driving incurred a little less at around 13% respectively. On the other hand, the main superior motivation for using an automobile for more space for comfort to employment represented significantly highest fractions for overall basis given as 40%. In addition, inhabitants figure their way and manage to calculate the distance to work and were estimated at 21%. Faster than cycling and the heaviness of the belongings they need to bring was exempted and expected as 14%. Lastly, the least percentage in this image was safety which was estimated roughly 11%

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