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The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. p0kD
The flow chart shows the cycle of water which is moved above the earth and below the earth. Overall, there are 6 stages in the illustrated in the purpose, commencing with the production of snow and ending with the formation of rain. Moreover, this is a natural and linear process. The first stage is when the snow is gathered on the surface, and this snow is run down the surface, and is mixed with ground water followed by an impervious layer. The next step after this is that it is mixed in the ocean water, and salt water is intruded there. Then, 80% of water is evaporated into the air which is caused in condensing water vapors which leads to the formation of clouds. The final stage is when it is started precipitation, and water is accumulated into the lakes.
The flow chart
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the cycle of
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water
which is
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moved
above the earth and below the earth.

Overall
, there are 6 stages in the illustrated in the purpose, commencing with the production of snow and ending with the formation of rain.
Moreover
, this is a natural and linear process.

The
first
stage is when the snow
is gathered
on the surface, and this snow
is run
down the surface, and
is mixed
with ground
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water
followed by an impervious layer. The
next
step after this is that it
is mixed
in the ocean
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water
, and salt
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water
is intruded
there.

Then, 80% of
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water
is evaporated
into the air which
is caused
in condensing
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water
vapors which leads to the formation of clouds. The final stage is when it is
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started
precipitation, and
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water
is accumulated
into the lakes.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

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