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The bar chart below shows about the average children born per woman in 5 countries in 1970 and 2000

The bar chart below shows about the average children born per woman in 5 countries in 1970 and 2000 WaJa

The given bar chart illustrates medium amount of childbirth in particular nations between 1970 and 2000. Overall, it is immediately apparent that at the beginning of the period India had the birth rate by per woman, at the end of the period Somalia takes the lead in chil birth rate. Looking at the 1970, the number of birth, in India and Thailand, was around 5 children. But in Mexico, Spain and Somalia, there were almost 3 children respectively. Turning to the next year, Indian and Thai woman gave birth average 3 and less than 2 respectively. In Spain average less than 3 children were born of a woman and it showed the lowest rate among five countries. However, Somalia had the highest quantity of childbirths per woman (about 3, 6).

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 the lowest rate among five countries. However
, Somalia had the highest quantity of childbirths per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
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