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The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries. Gxm2
The table depicts the past and future data of elderly people in percentages of three different countries Canada, Germany and United Kingdom over the period of 1988 to 2030. Overall, as per the table, the population of Germany is highest compared to other countries and also the growth of old people is to be expected more in Germany followed by Canada and UK. At first, the population of Germany host the maximum figures with 20. 45% in 1988 and 25. 35% in 2000 respectively. Secondly, the population of Canada of people who are senior citizen were 16. 32% which showed an economic growth to 20. 67% in the year 2000. A small margin of change was seen in country England which remained below 15% for the both of the years. Additionally, the highest growth is expected in the country Germany with 30. 42% in the year 2030. While, people residing in country Canada and UK of above 65 aged are to be growth with 26. 35% and 20. 35% in near future.
The table depicts the past and future data of elderly
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Canada, Germany and United Kingdom over the period of 1988 to 2030.

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more in Germany followed by Canada and UK.

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England which remained below 15% for the both of the years.

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Germany with 30. 42% in the year 2030. While,
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Canada and UK of above 65 aged are to be
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with 26. 35% and 20. 35% in near future.
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IELTS academic The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

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