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The diagram below shows the various stages involved in the production of beer.

The diagram below shows the various stages involved in the production of beer. 7adWk

The picture demonstrates the different steps to produce beer. The procedure starts with the processing of malted barley and ending with the packaging of beer. Firstly, the production of beer begins with the milling of malted barley. Then, it will be added with water to be mashed and lautered in separate containers. At the end of this process, spent grain is collected to feed the animals. After the spent grain is separated, the liquid is passed to another container to be boiled with sugar and hops. Then, it will be transferred to a whirlpool before cooling. The cooled liquid is then added to a combination of carbon dioxide and yeast to be fermented. After fermenting, the mixture will be left to mature in another container. The matured beer is then ready for filtering and packaging in which it will be bottled, pumped into kegs or loaded onto trucks for delivery.

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different
 steps to produce beer. The procedure This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 with the processing of malted barley and ending with the packaging of beer.

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, the production of beer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 with the milling of malted barley. Then, it will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 with water to be mashed
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lautered
 in separate containers. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this process, spent grain is collected
 to feed the animals.

After the spent grain is separated
, the liquid is passed
 to another container to be boiled
 with sugar and hops. Then, it will be transferred
 to a whirlpool This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 cooling. The cooled liquid is then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to a combination of carbon dioxide and yeast to be fermented
. After fermenting, the mixture will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 to mature in another container. The matured beer is then ready for filtering and packaging in which it will be bottled
, pumped into kegs or loaded onto trucks for delivery. 