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The bar graph given information about the male and female who never married in us .

The bar graph given information about the male and female who never married in us. NrG8N
The provides bar graph depicts, that the fraction of unmarried gentlemen and female in American between 1990 and 2010. Overall, at a quick glances that the proportion of un married female were gradually increasing in every year. but, the ratio of male who never married were always higher than women in the given year. As can be seen from the graph, in a intial year, the ratio of unmarried men in US. which was registered at more than 25%. but, there was a female with 18%. In the next year, the fraction of male who never married were married 25%. however the percentages of feminine were slightly declined with 5% in America. the ratio of citizens who never married was arround 25% gentleman and 21% female in 2005. Glancing ahead, the percentil of unmarried users gentleman less than 30% while, the fraction of women around 20% in 2008 in us. In 2009, the percentage of males, who never married were approximately thirty percent, but there was a fell less by ladies with 10% in us. The given last year, the proposition of unmarried citizens men and female were around 30% and over 20% respectively.
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gentlemen and
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in American between 1990 and 2010.

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, at a quick glances that the proportion of
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female
were
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.
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but
, the ratio of male
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who
never married were always higher than women in the
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year.

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seen
from the graph, in
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intial
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, the ratio of
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men
in US. which
was registered
at more than 25%.
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but
, there was a
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with 18%. In the
next
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, the fraction of male
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however
the percentages of feminine were
slightly
declined with 5% in America.
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the
ratio of citizens
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never married was
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arround
25% gentleman and 21%
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female
in 2005.

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of
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gentleman less than 30% while, the fraction of women around 20% in 2008 in us. In 2009, the percentage of males,
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who
never married were approximately thirty percent,
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there was a fell less by ladies with 10% in us. The
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last
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were around 30% and over 20%
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IELTS academic The bar graph given information about the male and female who never married in us.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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