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The map below show the changes that have taken place at Vietnam from 1995 to 2000.

The map below show the changes that have taken place at Vietnam from 1995 to 2000. PVmEw
The map desmonstrate the changes taking place in Vietnam in period from 1995 to 2000In generally, the city witnessed the dissaperance of farmland, forest park and the emergence of golf, car parkIn detail, in the Northwest, while most of thr housing stayed unchanged, the road was constructed. Meanwhile, in the Southwest, not only were shop and fish market gone, but a factory and apartments next to the sea also constructed. Moreover, in the Southeast witnessed the emergence of carpark, meanwhile, the hotel remain unchangedInterestingly, on the bottom witnessed the dissaperance of the fishing port
The map
desmonstrate
the
changes
taking place in Vietnam in period from 1995 to 2000In
generally
, the city witnessed the
dissaperance
of farmland, forest park and the emergence of golf, car
parkIn
detail, in the Northwest, while most of
thr
housing stayed unchanged, the road
was constructed
. Meanwhile, in the Southwest, not
only
were
shop and fish market gone,
but
a factory and apartments
next
to the sea
also
constructed.
Moreover
, in the Southeast witnessed the emergence of
carpark
, meanwhile, the hotel remain
unchangedInterestingly
, on the bottom witnessed the
dissaperance
of the fishing port
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IELTS academic The map below show the changes that have taken place at Vietnam from 1995 to 2000.

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