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The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment. v.3

The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment. v. 3
The given diagram shows the steps of the consumer products manufacturing process, as is clearly shown in the diagram that goods manufacturing is a complex process from collection of raw materials to the end product. As the process clearly shows the first stage of product development is collection and storage of raw materials and manufacturing components. The second stage involves designing of the products and production planning and it’s a lengthy process which includes supervision and monitoring designing progress frequently, and before market surveys, it is necessary to test the product to be aware the quality of the product. If the product is quality wise good then the next stage is packing of the products and make advertising for sale. In this production and manufacturing process, there are mainly two types of processes- the flow of manufacturing process and the flow of information feedback. In summary, it is value chain development process that starts from collection of raw materials to the end or final product for sale, in each stage of this manufacturing process value is added to products.
The
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diagram
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shows
the steps of the consumer
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products
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manufacturing
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process
, as is
clearly
shown in the diagram that
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goods
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manufacturing
is a complex
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process
from collection of raw materials to the
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end
product.

As the
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process
clearly
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shows
the
first
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stage
of
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product
development is collection and storage of raw materials and
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manufacturing
components. The second
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stage
involves designing of the
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products
and production planning and it’s a lengthy
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process
which includes supervision and monitoring designing progress
frequently
, and
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before
market surveys, it is necessary to
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test
the
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product
to be aware the quality of the
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product
. If the
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product
is quality wise
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good
then the
next
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stage
is packing of the
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products
and
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make
advertising for sale. In this production and
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manufacturing
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process
, there are
mainly
two types of
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processes-
the flow of
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manufacturing
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process
and the flow of information feedback.

In summary, it is value chain development
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process
that
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starts
from collection of raw materials to the
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end
or final
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product
for sale, in each
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stage
of this
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manufacturing
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process
value is
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added
to
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products
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment. v. 3

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
179 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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