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The diagram below shows the transformation of the area around Felix tone between 1967 and 2001

The diagram below shows the transformation of the area around Felix tone between 1967 and 2001 x888y

The two maps illustrate main changes in Felix tone between 1967 and 2001. İn general, it can be seen that the city of Felix tone became modern with more buildings than before. Right-hand side the farmland made way for a swimming pool, hotel and tennis courts, which were slightly bigger in size. The fish market, which was to east of the city in 1967 was demolished and private beach were built in its place. Some shops and apartments were completely renovated. To the south of the city, there was replacement of the hotel with a car park. The large tree zone was cut down to about 10% of it's original size. While there was a Marine to the southeast of the city it no longer existed in 2001. The wind turbines was knocked - down.

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 general, it can be sThis phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
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that the city of Felix tone became modern with more buildings than bThis phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
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bigger in size
. The fish market, which was Did you mean "too"?too
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 east of the city in 1967 was demolished
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shops and apartments were completely renovated. To the south of the city, there was replacement of the hotel with a car park. The large tree zone was cThis phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
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down to about 10% Did you mean "of its original"?of its original
of it's original
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 there was a Marine to the southeast of the city it no longer existed in 2001. The wind turbines was knocked
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