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The diagram below shows the structure of a home made smokery and how it is used.

The diagram below shows the structure of a home made smokery and how it is used. xx5My

The provided diagram illustrate the exact structure of a home made smoked fish as well as the process of how it can be used. It is clear from the given diagram that there are three procedures in the production of a home smokery, beginning with sending air from the opened lid and ending with smoking of fish and meat in a box. Also, there are various materials which are helped to produce smokery products. Looking more in details, at the first stage, air is transmitted from the unenclosed lid inside the ground through a deeper way in order to light a fire. After that logs which are under another lid are burned by the fire which is created by blowing air. At the next stage, by the burned logs pipe is created to smoke goods. In addition, one of the materials is bricks which is used in the production of a home made smokery, delivering smoke to products which are in box.

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 diagram that there are three procedures in the production of a home Possible spelling mistake found.smokersSmokeysmokersmokeysmoker y
smokery
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, at the first
 stage, air is transmitted
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 that logs which are under another lid are burned
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 by blowing air. At the next
 stage, by the burned logs pipe is created
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used
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smokery
, delivering smoke to products which are in box. 