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The diagram below shows the stages of recycling of aluminum drinks cans.

The diagram depicts how aluminum drinks cans are recycled in various stages. Overall, it is a man-made process, which is consist of five different stages, beginning with the collecting empty cans at a collection centre. All steps are important to compete the process. In the first stage of recycling of aluminum cans, collecting the used cans at a collection point from various destination. Then, cans are transported to a recycling centre, where it undergoes a different steps. In the aluminum recycling plant, initially melting process is done of old aluminum to making a new aluminum. Next, it is rolled to make a new cans. After thatcans are put in the drink machine for sale. Subsequently, process of recycling of cans continues.
The diagram depicts how
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aluminum
drinks
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cans
are recycled
in various stages.

Overall
, it is a
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man
-made process, which is consist of five
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different
stages, beginning with the collecting empty
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cans
at a collection
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centre
. All steps are
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important
to compete the process.

In the
first
stage of
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recycling
of
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aluminum
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cans
, collecting the
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used
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cans
at a collection point from various destination. Then,
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cans
are transported
to a
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recycling
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centre
, where it undergoes a
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different
steps.

In the
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aluminum
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recycling
plant,
initially
melting process
is done
of
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old
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aluminum
to making a new
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aluminum
.
Next
, it
is rolled
to
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make
a new
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cans
. After
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thatcans
are put
in the drink machine for sale.
Subsequently
, process of
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recycling
of
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cans
continues.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the stages of recycling of aluminum drinks cans.

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