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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts show the amount and quality of water supplied to two regions of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

These bay charts shows how many people, in percent, have water and how many per cent its cleanliness. It clear from graph that we have a develop in number of people supply with water the percent of quality. According to what it shown, we have Australia and the percentage of people supply with water in 1990 is 80% and that will be raise by 19 per cent to 99% in 2010. Then, we have quality of water and that was about seventy percent in nineteen-ninty to about 83% in 2010. While South East Asia countries have double from about 40%, in people who supply with water, to about eighty percentage in 2010, but we have a problem with cleanliness that gets down by a little from 40% to about 37%. To sum up, we can say that South East Asia region make as hard as they can to increase the people who supply with water and that have cost and it is the falling in quality. Australia also improve its water services and gets up in each of quality and number of people
These bay charts
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shows
how
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many
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people
, in percent, have
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water
and how
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many
per cent its cleanliness. It
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clear
from graph that we have
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a develop
in number of
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people
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supply
with
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water
the percent of quality.

According to what it
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shown
, we have Australia and the percentage of
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people
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supply
with
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water
in 1990 is 80% and that will be
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raise
by 19 per cent to 99% in 2010. Then, we have quality of
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water
and that was about seventy percent in
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nineteen-ninty
to about 83% in 2010.

While South East Asia countries have double from about 40%, in
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people
who
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supply
with
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water
, to about eighty percentage in 2010,
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but
we have a problem with cleanliness that
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gets
down by a
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from 40% to about 37%.

To sum up, we can say that South East Asia region
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make
as
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hard
as they can to increase the
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people
who
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supply
with
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water
and that have
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cost and
it is the falling in quality. Australia
also
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improve
its
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water
services and
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gets
up in each of quality and number of
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people
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IELTS academic The charts show the amount and quality of water supplied to two regions of the world.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
182 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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