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The diagram below shows the stages of processing cocoa beans. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process below.

The diagram below shows the stages of processing cocoa beans. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process below. bL0W

a being The flow chart gives information about how cocoa beans are picked, pressed and processed 0verall, there are three main phases employed to process cocoa beans which begins with picking and culminates with the consumer. In the first stage of processing cocoa beans, the whole beans are carefully picked from the shells and dried. Following that with the second stage, there are two exclusive categories of pressing the beans. On the one hand, the beans are further pressed into cocoa cake and ground into cocoa powder or cocoa liquor. Eventually, the resultant cocoa powder reaches the consumer industry. Here they are made into cakes, drinks. On the other hand in the second stage, the pressed beans are further refined into industrial chocolate. At this phase, sugar is added before it is processed finally. In the end, the finished chocolate products are are sent to the consumer

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a
 being The flow chart gives information about how cocoa You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are picked
, pressed and processed

0verall, there are three main phases employed to process cocoa You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 with picking and culminates with the consumer.

In the first
 stage of processing cocoa You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
, the whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 are carefully
 picked from the shells and dried. Following that with the second stage, there are two exclusive categories of pressing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
. On the one hand, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 are further
 pressed into cocoa cake and ground into cocoa powder or cocoa liquor. Eventually
, the resultant cocoa powder reaches the consumer industry. Here they are made
 into cakes, drinks.

On the other hand
 in the second stage, the pressed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 are further
 refined into industrial chocolate. At this phase, sugar is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
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before
 it is processed
finally
. In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, the finished chocolate products Possible typo: you repeated a wordare
are are
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sent
 to the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphconsumer.consumer!consumer?consumer:consumer,consumer;
consumer