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illustrate the following graph which shows the vaccine taker number in different countries of asia in different year

illustrate the following graph which shows the vaccine taker number in different countries of asia in different year 023O
The given graph provide us information about the number of vaccine takers of three countries from the year 2000 to 2020. The countries are respectively Bangladesh, India and China. The level line shows us years within 4 years gap in every step. The standing line inform us about the number of vaccine takers. From the entire graph we discover that in the last four years of the graph the number of vaccine taker in those three respective countries increased amusingly. In 2004 the number of vaccine takers in Bangladesh and China are almost same. Approximately 50, 000 people took vaccine in this respective year. In the same year Chinas vaccine takers number was double than Bangladesh and India. The following year in the graph in 2008 Chinas and Indians vaccine takers number was update. But Bangladeshi vaccine takers number was dropped. Around 1, 40, 000 people took vaccine in china, 1, 20, 000 India and about 30, 000 in Bangladesh. In the next year of the graph china continues their increasing motion. Number of vaccine taker also increased in Bangladesh but its not similar with India in this year. Chines vaccine takers are close to 2, 00000, India is almost half of china. Bangladeshi vaccine takers are around 80, 000. 1, 00000 people in Bangladesh took vaccine in 2016 when indians vaccine takers are double and chinas are nearly 2, 50, 000. Those three respective countries made an incredible improvement in this sector in the final year of the graph. china and India increased two times than the previous year and Bangladesh upward more than three times and stand on around 3, 50, 000 in 2020.
The
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provide us information about the
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number
of
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vaccine
takers of three
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countries
from the
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year
2000 to 2020. The
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countries
are
respectively
Bangladesh, India and China.
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The
level line
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shows
us years within 4 years gap in every step.
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The
standing line inform us about the
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number
of
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vaccine
takers.

From the entire
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graph
we discover that in the last four years of the
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the
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number
of
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vaccine
taker in those three respective
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countries
increased
amusingly
.

In 2004 the
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of
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vaccine
takers in Bangladesh and China are almost same. Approximately 50, 000
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people
took
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vaccine
in this respective
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year
. In the same
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Chinas
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was double than Bangladesh and India.

The following
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in the
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in 2008
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Chinas
and Indians
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was update.
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Bangladeshi
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was dropped
. Around 1, 40, 000
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in
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china
, 1, 20, 000 India and about 30, 000 in Bangladesh.

In the
next
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china continues their increasing motion.
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also
increased in Bangladesh
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its not similar with India in this
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. Chines
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takers are close to 2, 00000, India is almost half of china. Bangladeshi
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takers are around 80, 000.

1, 00000
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in Bangladesh took
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in 2016 when
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indians
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takers are double and
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chinas
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Those three respective
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made an incredible improvement in this sector in the final
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of the
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.
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china
and India increased two
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and Bangladesh upward more than three times and stand on around 3, 50, 000 in 2020.
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