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ambridge Book 13 Test 1, Academic Writing Task 1 IELTS Report on City Hospital in 2007: The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. and 2010

ambridge Book 13 Test 1, Academic Writing Task 1 IELTS Report on City Hospital in 2007: The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. dW26

The maps show a comparative study of the access to City Hospital in the years 2007 and 2010. It is evident from the maps that there has been quite a bit of development in the area surrounding the City Hospital in a span of 3 years. The first map illustrates the presence of a bus stop to the East of the city Hospital. The main road leading to the hospital, termed as the 'Hospital road', shows an approach from the City Road south of the building. There is a common car park for the staff as well as public visiting the hospital which may be resulting in congestion and discomfort for both. The second map represents development in terms of comfort for the commuters to and around the City Hospital. The car parking, for instance, has been divided into two different portions- Public parking to the East of the building and the staff parking along the Hospital Road where the old facility existed. The Bus Station, which was at quite some distance from the City Hospital was shifted from the eastern side to the South-west- opposite the Staff Parking on the other side of the Hospital Road. This makes the approach for commuters by bus now much easier. An overall view of both the maps suggests some favourable developments and improvements made for visitors and workers of the City Hospital from 2007 to 2010.

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maps
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 a comparative study of the access to City You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
 in the years 2007 and 2010. It is evident from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
maps
 that there has been quite a bit of development in the area surrounding the City You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
 in a span of 3 years.

The first
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map
 illustrates the presence of a bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 to the East of the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
. The main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 leading to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
, termed as the 'Hospital road', This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 an approach from the City You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
 south of the building. There is a common car park for the staff as well
 as public visiting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 which may be resulting in congestion and discomfort for both.

The second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
 represents development in terms of comfort for the commuters to and around the City You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
. The car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
, for instance
, has been divided
 into two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 portions- Public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 to the East of the building and the staff You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 along the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
 where the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 facility existed. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 Bus Station, which was at quite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 distance from the City You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
was shifted
 from the eastern side to the South-west- opposite the Staff You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Parking
 on the other side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 the approach for commuters by bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 much easier.

An overall
 view of both the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
maps
 suggests This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourable' is British English.favorable
favourable
 developments and improvements made for visitors and workers of the City You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
 from 2007 to 2010. 