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ambridge Book 13 Test 1, Academic Writing Task 1 IELTS Report on City Hospital in 2007: The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. and 2010

ambridge Book 13 Test 1, Academic Writing Task 1 IELTS Report on City Hospital in 2007: The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. dW26
The maps show a comparative study of the access to City Hospital in the years 2007 and 2010. It is evident from the maps that there has been quite a bit of development in the area surrounding the City Hospital in a span of 3 years. The first map illustrates the presence of a bus stop to the East of the city Hospital. The main road leading to the hospital, termed as the 'Hospital road', shows an approach from the City Road south of the building. There is a common car park for the staff as well as public visiting the hospital which may be resulting in congestion and discomfort for both. The second map represents development in terms of comfort for the commuters to and around the City Hospital. The car parking, for instance, has been divided into two different portions- Public parking to the East of the building and the staff parking along the Hospital Road where the old facility existed. The Bus Station, which was at quite some distance from the City Hospital was shifted from the eastern side to the South-west- opposite the Staff Parking on the other side of the Hospital Road. This makes the approach for commuters by bus now much easier. An overall view of both the maps suggests some favourable developments and improvements made for visitors and workers of the City Hospital from 2007 to 2010.
The
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show
a comparative study of the access to City
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Hospital
in the years 2007 and 2010. It is evident from the
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maps
that there has been quite a bit of development in the area surrounding the City
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Hospital
in a span of 3 years.

The
first
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map
illustrates the presence of a bus
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stop
to the East of the city
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Hospital
. The main
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road
leading to the
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hospital
, termed as the 'Hospital road',
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shows
an approach from the City
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Road
south of the building. There is a common car park for the staff
as well
as public visiting the
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hospital
which may be resulting in congestion and discomfort for both.

The second
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map
represents development in terms of comfort for the commuters to and around the City
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Hospital
. The car
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parking
,
for instance
, has
been divided
into two
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different
portions- Public
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parking
to the East of the building and the staff
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parking
along the
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Hospital
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Road
where the
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old
facility existed.
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The
Bus Station, which was at quite
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some
distance from the City
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Hospital
was shifted
from the eastern side to the South-west- opposite the Staff
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Parking
on the other side of the
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Hospital
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Road
. This
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makes
the approach for commuters by bus
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now
much easier.

An
overall
view of both the
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maps
suggests
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some
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favourable
developments and improvements made for visitors and workers of the City
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Hospital
from 2007 to 2010.

IELTS academic ambridge Book 13 Test 1, Academic Writing Task 1 IELTS Report on City Hospital in 2007: The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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4 paragraphs
234 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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