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The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drink cans. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drink cans. JkkB
The diagram illustrates the steps involved in how aluminium drinks cans are recycled. Overall there are seven stages in the process, from the cans being sorted at the collection centre to the melting down process at the recycling plant where new aluminium is formed, and finally where new cans are produced and ready for sale again. To begin with, in the collection centre used drinks cans are put into a recycling bin and then separated into aluminium and steel. Following this, the sorted cans are transported to a recycling facility where they are crushed into cubes ready for melting down. Regarding the recycling process, the cubes of old aluminium are melted down at high temperatures and turned into bars of new aluminium. As soon as these bars have been created, they are formed into thin sheets and rolled up. Subsequently, this rolled up aluminium is used to create new drinks cans. Once they are made, they are ready to be filled with beverages and distributed to shops and vending machines for consumption. After that, the whole process is repeated all over again.
The diagram illustrates the steps involved in how
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aluminium
drinks
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cans
are recycled
.
Overall
there are seven stages in the
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process
, from the
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cans
being sorted
at the collection
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centre
to the melting down
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process
at the
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recycling
plant where
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new
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aluminium
is formed
, and
finally
where
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new
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cans
are produced
and ready for sale again. To
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begin
with, in the collection
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centre
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used
drinks
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cans
are put
into a
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recycling
bin and then separated into
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aluminium
and steel. Following this, the sorted
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cans
are transported
to a
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recycling
facility where they
are crushed
into cubes ready for melting down. Regarding the
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recycling
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process
, the cubes of
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old
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aluminium
are melted
down at high temperatures and turned into bars of
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new
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aluminium
. As
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soon
as these bars have
been created
, they
are formed
into thin sheets and rolled up.
Subsequently
, this rolled up
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aluminium
is
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used
to create
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new
drinks
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cans
. Once they
are made
, they are ready to
be filled
with beverages and distributed to shops and vending machines for consumption. After that, the whole
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process
is repeated
all over again.
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