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The diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 3nEb
The figures illustrate the stages in the life of a silkworm and the process of producing silk cloth. There are four main stages in the life cycle of the silkworm, from eggs to adult moth. The process of silk cloth production involves six steps, from silkworm cocoon to silk material. Interestingly in 10 days eggs of the adult moth convert to lava which depends on mulberry leaf as their main food. In terms of the duration of transformation from lava to silk thread for certain takes the longest time compare to all other stages. Then in 3-8 days cocoons result from larva which is the most pivotal product of this biological process for the foreseeing project of silk material. The silk material production process commence with boiling the selected eggs in the hot water then follows a drying procedure. The end result indeed we name as ''Thread'' is undergoing a dyeing procedure in any colour, in order to weave to get a silk material.
The figures illustrate the stages in the life of a silkworm and the
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process
of producing
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silk
cloth.

There are four main stages in the life cycle of the silkworm, from eggs to adult moth. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
silk
cloth production involves six steps, from silkworm cocoon to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
silk
material.

Interestingly
in 10 days eggs of the adult moth convert to lava which depends on mulberry leaf as their main food. In terms of the duration of transformation from lava to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
silk
thread for certain takes the longest time compare to all other stages. Then in 3-8 days cocoons result from larva which is the most pivotal product of this biological
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
for the foreseeing project of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
silk
material.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
silk
material production
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process
commence with boiling the selected eggs in the hot water then follows a drying procedure. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
result
indeed
we name as ''Thread'' is undergoing a dyeing procedure in any
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colour
, in order to weave to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
silk
material.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

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