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The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. qqoa
The table below gives information about the number of people, visited four museums, named Louvre, London Science Museum, Vatican museum and Shenzhen Museum, over a 35 year period from 1980 to 2015. Overall, the number of visitors in all museums increased over the period in question, with the only exception of London Science Museum, which decreased considerably by 2015. Looking at the details, we can see that the number of people in Louvre grew gently before 1995, where the number of visitors got a considerable fall to about 7 millions below. But after 1995 percentage started to grow significantly to about 10 millions people by the end of 2015. Furthermore, the Vatican museum got an upward trend from 1980 without any decrease by the end of the period, having about 9 millions in the end. Noteworthy that the London Science Museum had a considerable decline over the all 25 year period, having about 4 millions people at the beginning and about 2 millions visitors in the end. Although the fact that the Scenzhen museum fell fractionally before 2000, where it has only about 3 millions visitors below, by the end of the period in question the museum returned to the same showings that were in 1980, having about 4 millions visitors.
The table below gives information about the
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museums
, named Louvre, London Science
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Museum
, Vatican
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and Shenzhen
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Museum
, over a
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35 year
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from 1980 to 2015.

Overall
, the
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visitors
in all
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museums
increased over the
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exception of London Science
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Museum
, which decreased
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by 2015.

Looking at the
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, we can
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1995, where the
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visitors
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a considerable fall to about 7
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after 1995 percentage
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started
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, the Vatican
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an upward trend from 1980 without any decrease by the
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end
of the
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, having about 9
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in the
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.

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had a considerable decline over the all
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. Although the fact that the
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Scenzhen
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fell
fractionally
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2000, where it has
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about 3
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returned to the same showings that were in 1980, having about 4
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