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The diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 7nEA
The first diagram depicts the different stages in the life cycle of the silk worm. The second set of diagrams depicts the processes involved in the production of silk cloth from this cocoon. The moth lays eggs on the mulberry leaves and within ten days the eggs hatch into silkworm larva. The larva feeds on mulberry leaves and within 4 to 6 weeks, it starts weaving the silk thread. In three to eight days, this thread encases its body and forms a cocoon. The cocoon evolves into the moth in 16 days and the cycle starts again. In order to produce silk cloth, the cocoons are boiled in hot water and the threads are unwound. The threads could be of 300 to 900 meters in length. Some of these threads are twisted and subjected to dye, while others are woven into silk cloth. Both are now ready for the market.
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diagram depicts the
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different
stages in the life cycle of the
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silk
worm. The second set of diagrams depicts the processes involved in the production of
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silk
cloth from this cocoon.

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The
moth lays eggs on the mulberry
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leaves
and within ten days the eggs hatch into silkworm larva.
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The
larva feeds on mulberry
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leaves
and within 4 to 6 weeks, it
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starts
weaving the
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silk
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thread
. In three to eight days, this
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thread
encases its body and forms a cocoon. The cocoon evolves into the moth in 16 days and the cycle
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starts
again.

In order to produce
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silk
cloth, the cocoons
are boiled
in hot water and the threads are unwound. The threads could be of 300 to 900 meters in length.
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Some
of these threads
are twisted
and subjected to dye, while others
are woven
into
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silk
cloth. Both are
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now
ready for the market.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
150 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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