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The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drink cans. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drink cans. XYXA
The diagram depicts how aluminium drinks cans are recycled. Overall, the process is man made and cyclic manners. It is 7 step process. this process begin with collection of drink cans from collection centre. 10 recycle drink cans and ready to sales again to continue this process. To begin with, indigo collection centre used ring can put in a recycle bin and after that separated into aluminium and steel. Then, jis salted cans are transported to the recycling centre. In this centre, before the melting process salted cans are crossed in cubes. the next stage is closed cubes all transferred into aluminium recycling plant where they are melting and converted into new aluminium. Subsequently, new aluminium rolled out after made new cans. Next, new cans are cells of drink machines. Then this process starts again.
The diagram depicts how
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aluminium
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drinks
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cans
are recycled
.
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, the
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process
is
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man
made and cyclic manners. It is
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7 step
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process
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this
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process
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begin
with collection of
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drink
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cans
from collection
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centre
. 10 recycle
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drink
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cans
and ready to sales again to continue this
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process
. To
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begin
with, indigo collection
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centre
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used
ring
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can
put in a recycle bin and after that separated into
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aluminium
and steel. Then,
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jis
salted
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cans
are transported
to the recycling
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centre
. In this
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centre
,
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before
the melting
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process
salted
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cans
are crossed
in cubes.
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the
next
stage
is closed
cubes all transferred into
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aluminium
recycling plant where they are melting and converted into
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new
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aluminium
.
Subsequently
,
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new
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aluminium
rolled out after made
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new
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cans
.
Next
,
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new
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cans
are cells of
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drink
machines. Then this
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process
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starts
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drink cans.

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