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people visit to and from the UK

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The line graph illustrates how many people visit from the UK who went abroad and those that came to the UK between 1979 to 1999, while the bar chart shows which countries were the most popular to visit for UK residents in 1999. Also, it is measured in millions. Overall, it can be seen that the number of people visit to and from the UK increased, and France was the most popular country to go to. To begin, the number of visit abroad by UK residents was higher than for those that came to the UK and this remained so throughout the period. This pattern started at similar total nearly 10, but visits abroad raised significantly above 50 million, whereas the number of overseas residents stayed steadily about 30 million. The most popular country visited by UK residents in 1999 was France far away from other countries (around 12 millions), followed by Spain (9 millions). The USA, Greece and Turkey were far less popular at around 4, 3 and 2 million visitor respectively.

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