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The diagram below shows the process for making a water clock. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for making a water clock. mY9r
The given diagram illustrates the process involved in the making of a water clock using two plastic bottles, a stand, some tape and a straw. Overall, several stages are involved in the making and functioning of a water clock which begins with the preparation of the basic structure and ends with its operation. The process begins with the assembling of the structure required for functioning of the water clock. Initially a straw that protrudes is attached to the bottle a little below its neck using glue and also a small hole is punctured at the bottom of the bottle which is tapped on to the upper part of the stand. Another bottle with its neck cut off is placed on the stand right below the first bottle which has markings on it for measuring the time. The prepared structure is placed below a tap which is turned on for filling water in the first bottle. During the process of filling, the hole at the bottom of the bottle is covered using a finger after which the water is allowed to overflow through the straw attached at the upper portion of the bottle. On reaching a constant level the finger is removed from the hole allowing the water to flow drop by drop into the second bottle. Each level marked on the second bottle acts a unit for measuring time in minutes. The second bottle is then emptied and the process is repeated for timing things.
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given
diagram illustrates the
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process
involved in the making of a
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water
clock using two plastic
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bottles
, a stand,
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some
tape and a straw.

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, several stages
are involved
in the making and functioning of a
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water
clock which
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begins
with the preparation of the basic structure and ends with its operation.

The
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process
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begins
with the assembling of the structure required for functioning of the
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water
clock.
Initially
a straw that protrudes
is attached
to the
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bottle
a
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little
below its neck using glue and
also
a
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small
hole
is punctured
at the bottom of the
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bottle
which
is tapped
on to the upper part of the stand. Another
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bottle
with its neck
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cut
off
is placed
on the stand right below the
first
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bottle
which has markings on it for measuring the time.

The prepared structure
is placed
below a tap which
is turned
on for filling
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water
in the
first
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bottle
. During the
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process
of filling, the hole at the bottom of the
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bottle
is covered
using a finger after which the
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water
is
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allowed
to overflow through the straw attached at the upper portion of the
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bottle
. On reaching a constant level the finger
is removed
from the hole allowing the
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water
to flow drop by drop into the second
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bottle
. Each level marked on the second
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bottle
acts a unit for measuring time in minutes. The second
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bottle
is then emptied and the
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process
is repeated
for timing things.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the process for making a water clock.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
245 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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