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The given illustration shows the method of setting up an individual water clock.

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The given illustration shows the method of setting up an individual water clock. Of the seven steps in the whole process, in the first stage, water is collected in the plastic bottle, which is taped at the top part of the stand. As the water fills the bottle, with the help of any finger, the small hole at the bottom is to be covered. This allows water move upwards and fill the bottle. The straw, which is glued to the bottle at a level at its top side helps it to maintain a constant level of water in the bottle. In the fifth step, the finger is made free from the hole and the water is allowed to drop into the second bottle, with an open neck placed at the bottom of the stand. On this bottle, during this process, the levels are marked every minute. The bottle is emptied when it becomes full and the process continues for timing things.
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illustration
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shows
the method of setting up an individual
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water
clock.

Of the seven steps in the whole process, in the
first
stage,
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water
is collected
in the plastic
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bottle
, which
is taped
at the top part of the stand. As the
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water
fills the
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bottle
, with the
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help
of any finger, the
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small
hole at the bottom is to
be covered
. This
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allows
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water
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move
upwards and fill the
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bottle
. The straw, which
is glued
to the
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bottle
at a level at its top side
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helps
it to maintain a constant level of
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water
in the
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bottle
. In the fifth step, the finger
is made
free from the hole and the
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water
is
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allowed
to drop into the second
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bottle
, with an open neck placed at the bottom of the stand. On this
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bottle
, during this process, the levels
are marked
every minute. The
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bottle
is emptied
when it becomes full and the process continues for timing things.
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IELTS academic The given illustration shows the method of setting up an individual water clock.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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