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The map shows two possible locations for the planned supermarket in Garsdon City.

The map shows two possible locations for the planned supermarket in Garsdon City. 8D6x
The map shows two possible locations for the planned supermarket in Garsdon City. Overall, it clearly shows that one of the possible sites for a supermarket in the countryside while the other supermarkets will be in the town centre Firstly, it appears that the first site of the supermarket (S1) which is located in the side Country whereas this far from the town Center and residential place. However, this Could be reached by the public in the town Center and housing area by train and other transports on roads as a railway track and the main road are connecting the supermarket and town centre. Besides, although it is located near to Hendon it is far away from Bransdon and Gransdon which have a higher population than Hindon. Further, the second possible site to the supermarket (S2) which is situated in the Center of the town where the public in the town has easy access. It is adequate that is most Coinvent for the individual who resides in Hindon and Gransdon as there are two ways to reach it, either by train or through the main roads. On the other hand, those from Bransdon can only visit the supermarket through the main road.
The map
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two possible locations for the planned supermarket in
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Garsdon
City.
Overall
, it
clearly
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shows
that one of the possible sites for a supermarket in the countryside while the other supermarkets will be in the
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town
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centre


Firstly
, it appears that the
first
site of the supermarket (S1) which
is located
in the side Country whereas this far from the
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town
Center and residential place.
However
, this Could
be reached
by the public in the
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town
Center and housing area by train and other transports on
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roads
as a railway
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track
and the main
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road
are connecting the supermarket and
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town
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centre
.
Besides
, although it
is located
near to
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Hendon
it is far away from
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Bransdon
and
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Gransdon
which have a higher population than
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Hindon
.

Further
, the second possible site to the supermarket (S2) which
is situated
in the Center of the
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town
where the public in the
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town
has easy access. It is adequate
that is
most
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Coinvent
for the individual who resides in
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Hindon
and
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Gransdon
as there are two ways to reach it, either by train or through the main
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roads
.
On the other hand
, those from
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Bransdon
can
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only
visit the supermarket through the main
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road
.
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IELTS academic The map shows two possible locations for the planned supermarket in Garsdon City.

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6.0
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