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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

A map derives information about progress of Ryemouth village from year of 1995 till present date. In general, it can be said that Ryemouth village has been improved a lot since from 1995 to present day. Many places have been developed by time passed. From, having farms to having large places for playing different outdoor games. There was a fish market and cafe situated at Fishing port, but now newly apartments are constructed at that location. A drastically change shown at place where shops, but now they have been replaced by restaurants. A new car parking is now there behind the hotel. A newly tennis coat and golf playing area had taken place where a forest park was there. In 1995 it was fishing port near sea, now it is only sea remaining at that place. As there is rise in number houses near Housing area.
A map derives information about progress of
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Ryemouth
village from year of 1995 till present date.

In general
, it can
be said
that
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Ryemouth
village has been
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improved
a lot since from 1995 to present day.
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Many
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places
have
been developed
by time passed. From, having farms to having large
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places
for playing
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different
outdoor games.

There was a fish market and
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cafe
situated at Fishing port,
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but
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now
newly
apartments
are constructed
at that location. A
drastically
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change
shown at
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place
where shops,
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but
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now
they have
been replaced
by restaurants.

A new car parking is
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now
there behind the hotel. A
You used an adverb (‘newly’) instead of an adjective, or a noun (‘tennis’) instead of another adjective.
newly tennis
coat and golf playing area had taken
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place
where a forest park was there. In
The comma is probably missing here: “1995, it”.
1995 it
was fishing port near sea,
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now
it is
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only
sea remaining at that
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place
.
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As
there is rise in number
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houses
near Housing area.
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IELTS academic The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
146 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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