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The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country. 56LwN
The charts show how many agriculture products made in two particular areas of the country. Eastern Region prefers Meat and Dairy more, whereas Western Region likes Grain and Meat more. In the Eastern Region, most people chose to produce more products from cattle than plants. The highest number of production is meat which made up 35% of total. The second highest occupying 30% of the pie is dairy. 15% and 20% left of production belong to people like making a living by grain and vegetables, respectively. On the other side, Western farmer favored much different products than the East. Grain production rise significantly to 45% of total, whereas meat maintain the same portion as Eastern Region. Dairy fell half-off to 15% compare to whose of Eastern. The last small part of farmer, 5%, chose to grow vegetables. In general, Eastern people favored more products from cattle than plants, while the West tried to produce both.
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made in two particular areas of the country. Eastern
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and Dairy more, whereas Western
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In the Eastern
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chose to produce more
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from cattle than plants. The highest number of production is
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which made up 35% of total. The second highest occupying 30% of the pie is dairy. 15% and 20%
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On the other side, Western farmer favored much
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than the East. Grain production rise
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maintain the same portion as Eastern
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. Dairy fell half-off to 15% compare to whose of Eastern. The last
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part of farmer, 5%, chose to grow vegetables.

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from cattle than plants, while the West tried to produce both.
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IELTS academic The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country.

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