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The picture illustrates how sheep embryos are cloned.

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The picture illustrates how sheep embryos are cloned. Overall, there are six steps in the cloning process of sheep’s embryo. The process initiates with a extraction of body cell from a female sheep A and a egg cell from another female sheep B while, culminates with a birth of a cloned lamb of sheep A. A body cell from female sheep A is taken while a egg cell is taken from a female sheep B. Then, DNA is extracted from the body cell taken from a sheep A whereas nucleus of egg cell taken from sheep B is removed. Later, the extracted DNA from sheep A is fused with a egg cell from sheep B. With regards to the remaining process, the fused cell grows into an embryo which is kept in a uterus of a foster mother. A foster mother gives birth to a cloned lamb of sheep A along with which a process ends.
The picture illustrates how sheep embryos
are cloned
.

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, there are six steps in the cloning
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process
of sheep’s embryo. The
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process
initiates with
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a
extraction of body
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cell
from a
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female
sheep A and
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a
egg
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cell
from another
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female
sheep B while, culminates with a birth of a cloned lamb of sheep A.

A body
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cell
from
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female
sheep A
is taken
while
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a
egg
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cell
is taken
from a
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female
sheep B. Then, DNA
is extracted
from the body
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cell
taken from a sheep A whereas nucleus of egg
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cell
taken from sheep B
is removed
. Later, the extracted DNA from sheep A
is fused
with
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a
egg
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cell
from sheep B.

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With regards to
the remaining
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process
, the fused
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cell
grows into an embryo which is
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kept
in a uterus of a foster mother. A foster mother gives birth to a cloned lamb of sheep A along with which a
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process
ends.

IELTS academic The picture illustrates how sheep embryos are cloned.

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