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Overall, there are six steps of production of milk and milk related products such as, cheese, cream, and butter.

Overall, there are six steps of production of milk and milk related products such as, cheese, cream, and butter. 2MqA
Overall, there are six steps of production of milk and milk related products such as, cheese, cream, and butter. The process initiates with the milking of cow's milk by a machine and culminates with the delivery of packed milk to the supermarkets and shops. Ath the beginnig, cows are grazed in a field and are milked by a milking machine twice a day. Then, all the milk is stored in a refrigeration storage and is delivered to the dairy in a milk tanker. The process of pasteurization takes place in the dairy milk to kill the microbes and make the milk safe to consume. With regard to the remaining steps, some amount of pasteurized milk is used to make the cheese, cream, and butter while, remaining milk is packed for a delivery. All those packages of milk are delivered to the supermarkets and shops where, consumers can buy them.
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, there are six steps of production of
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milk
and
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milk
related products such as, cheese, cream, and butter. The process initiates with the milking of cow's
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milk
by a machine and culminates with the delivery of packed
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milk
to the supermarkets and shops.

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the
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beginnig
, cows
are grazed
in a field and
are milked
by a milking machine twice a day. Then, all the
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milk
is stored
in a refrigeration storage and
is delivered
to the dairy in a
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milk
tanker. The process of pasteurization takes place in the dairy
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milk
to kill the microbes and
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make
the
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milk
safe to consume.

With regard to the remaining steps,
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some
amount of pasteurized
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milk
is
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used
to
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make
the cheese, cream, and butter while, remaining
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milk
is packed
for a delivery. All those packages of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
milk
are delivered
to the supermarkets and shops where, consumers can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
them.

IELTS academic Overall, there are six steps of production of milk and milk related products such as, cheese, cream, and butter.

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