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The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. GaW2
A glance at the graph illustrates tools that used by Stone Age people were changed over 0. 6 million years. They are used to cook and protect their bodies. In overall, b tool is thinner and comfortable in a hand than a tool. In order word, this was developed for consumption. A tool used a long time before(1. 4 million years ago), moreover, another tool is more young(0. 8 million years ago). If it sees front side tools are little difference. B view is more huge, however it have lot of fixes. Side view depicts a picture is not sharply. In Addition, look at the back view b tool is more cozy by the hand. Length is both of approximately 10 cm.
A glance at the graph illustrates
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tools
that
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used
by Stone Age
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people
were
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changed
over 0. 6 million years. They are
In the grammatical structure 'pronoun + be/get + used + to + verb', the verb 'used' is used with the gerund: "used to cooking".
used to cook
and protect their bodies.

In
overall
, b
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tool
is thinner and comfortable in a hand than a
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tool
. In order word, this
was developed
for consumption.

A
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tool
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used
a long time
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before
(1. 4 million years ago),
moreover
, another
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tool
is more young(0. 8 million years ago).
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
it
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sees
front side
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tools
are
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little
difference. B view is more huge,
however
it
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have
It seems that an article is missing.
lot of
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fixes
. Side view depicts a picture is not
sharply
.
In Addition
, look at the back view b
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tool
is more cozy by the hand. Length is both of approximately 10 cm.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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