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The bar chart below demonstrates the various types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010. Summarize the facts by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below demonstrates the various types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010. Summarize the facts by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. o2D9
This bar chart illustrates the holiday accommodation selected by people in the UK in 2010. Overall, it is possible to say that the English, Scottish, Northern and Welsh had very similar choices and hotels were the most popular type of accommodation. In all four countries, around 50% people selected to stay in hotels. This percentage was highest in England with around 55%, which was two times more than the number of people (27%) who cooked for themselves and greater than the number of people(12%) who stayed in campsites. The same pattern was found for the Scots and the Welsh. In each case, around 50% of holidaymakers took the hotels as their accommodation and with around 30% people went for self-catering apartments. The one exception was caravan holidays at 12%, which was more popular than camping holidays in Scotland. On the other hand, the opposite pattern was found in the Wales. But the one country Northern Ireland shows a different pattern. In this country, over 30% of the people chose caravan which was more popular than self-catering accommodation and camping (both around 12%).
This bar chart illustrates the holiday accommodation selected by
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in the UK in 2010.

Overall
, it is possible to say that the English, Scottish, Northern and Welsh had
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similar choices and hotels were the most popular type of accommodation.

In all four countries,
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around
50%
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people
selected to stay in hotels. This percentage was highest in England with
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around
55%, which was two times more than the number of
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people
(27%) who cooked for themselves and greater than the number of
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people(12%)
who stayed in campsites.

The same pattern
was found
for the Scots and the Welsh. In each case,
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around
50% of holidaymakers took the hotels as their accommodation and with
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around
30%
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people
went for self-catering apartments. The one exception was caravan holidays at 12%, which was more popular than camping holidays in Scotland.
On the other hand
, the opposite pattern
was found
in the Wales.

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the one country Northern Ireland
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pattern. In this country, over 30% of the
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chose caravan which was more popular than self-catering accommodation and camping (both
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around
12%).
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IELTS academic The bar chart below demonstrates the various types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010. Summarize the facts by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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182 words
6.0
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