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the diagram below shows the design for a wind turbine and its location

The diagrams illustrate what a wind turbine look like and where it should be placed. According the diagrams, there are three possible for a turbine. A large industrial turbine is built high up on a hillside where the wind is strongest, and these turbine can produce 1. 5 megawatts of power. Otherwise, smaller turbines that produce 100 kilowatts of power for domestic. The third possible position is in the sea. Here, there has very strongly winds. While the locations may be different, the turbines themselves all have the same special shape. They consist of a tall tower made of strong steel and on top of this there are three blades made of fiberglass or wood. The turbine are controlled by a computer which can alter the direction and angle of the blades according to the information it receives from a sensor. Clearly, most wind turbine are very humorous, and all turbines need to be exposed to plenty of wind.
The diagrams illustrate what a
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look like and where it should
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.

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possible
for a
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turbine
. A large industrial
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turbine
is built
high up on a hillside where the
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wind
is strongest, and these
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turbine
can produce 1. 5 megawatts of power.
Otherwise
, smaller
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turbines
that produce 100 kilowatts of power for domestic. The third possible position is in the sea. Here, there has
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very
strongly
winds.

While the locations may be
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different
, the
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turbines
themselves all have the same special shape. They consist of a tall tower made of strong steel and on top of this there are three blades made of fiberglass or wood. The
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are
controlled by a computer which can alter the direction and angle of the blades according to the information it receives from a sensor.

Clearly
, most
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wind
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are
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very
humorous, and all
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need to
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to
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plenty
of
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IELTS academic the diagram below shows the design for a wind turbine and its location

Academic
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4 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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