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the diagram below shows the design for a wind turbine and its location

The diagrams illustrate what a wind turbine look like and where it should be placed. According the diagrams, there are three possible for a turbine. A large industrial turbine is built high up on a hillside where the wind is strongest, and these turbine can produce 1. 5 megawatts of power. Otherwise, smaller turbines that produce 100 kilowatts of power for domestic. The third possible position is in the sea. Here, there has very strongly winds. While the locations may be different, the turbines themselves all have the same special shape. They consist of a tall tower made of strong steel and on top of this there are three blades made of fiberglass or wood. The turbine are controlled by a computer which can alter the direction and angle of the blades according to the information it receives from a sensor. Clearly, most wind turbine are very humorous, and all turbines need to be exposed to plenty of wind.

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turbine
 look like and where it should be placed
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is built
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wind
 is strongest, and these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcylindergeneratortransformer
turbine
 can produce 1. 5 megawatts of power. Otherwise
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turbines
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strongly
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different
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turbines
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turbine
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are
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turbine
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turbines
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plenty
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wind
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