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The diagram below shows the changes of an island between 1990 and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.1

The diagram below shows the changes of an island between 1990 and now.
The presented map indicates the renovation of an island from 1990 to present. Overall, the local has been modified radically over the period. Specifically, lands have been channeled into accommodations, whereas its accessibility has been also facilitated. Turning into detail, regarding to infrastructure, the island used to be totally primitive with only trees distributed on both the western and eastern edge. However, at present, although they still remain, the western ones have been surrounded by new accommodations, while the eastern ones have a proximity to another erected building block. In addition, at the heart of the island, a reception centre has been built, along with a new restaurant to the northern part. Regarding to traffic, the entire region becomes more approachable for visitors thanks to the construction of a pier in the south, which is connected to island centre by a vehicle track. Furthermore, it is also this road, which runs through the reception and leads to the restaurant, makes transportation between these locations possible. Meanwhile, apartments are connected to each other by circular footpaths, which also have a branch to the beach.
The presented map indicates the renovation of an
island
from 1990 to present.

Overall
, the local has
been modified
radically
over the period.
Specifically
, lands have
been channeled
into accommodations, whereas its accessibility has been
also
facilitated.

Turning into detail,
regarding to
infrastructure, the
island
used
to be
totally
primitive with
only
trees distributed on both the western and eastern edge.
However
, at present, although they
still
remain, the western ones have
been surrounded
by new accommodations, while the eastern ones have a proximity to another erected building block.
In addition
, at the heart of the
island
, a reception
centre
has
been built
, along with a new restaurant to the northern part.

Regarding to
traffic, the entire region becomes more approachable for visitors thanks to the construction of a pier in the south, which
is connected
to
island
centre
by a vehicle
track
.
Furthermore
, it is
also
this road, which runs through the reception and leads to the restaurant,
makes
transportation between these locations possible. Meanwhile, apartments
are connected
to each other by circular footpaths, which
also
have a branch to the beach.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the changes of an island between 1990 and now.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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