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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows some design principles for an energy-efficient house and how they work in different climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows some design principles for an energy-efficient house and how they work in different climates. jOK1
This digram shows a number of design principles for an energy-efficient house and how they work in warm and cold climates. According to what is shown, in a warm climate the sun shine fell on the roof but it is reflect because of a material that covering the whole roof. Then, you have an underground floor that retent the heat and the heat flow outside. Also we have insulation and that a material prevent heat from passing through it. And in this case it prevent the heat from going inside. While in cold climate, the sun light goes in and the it maximize with heat in triple-glazed. While we have an underground floor sun protection that to protect the floor from the sun. And here also we have insulation but in this case it did not prevent heat to go inside, instead it prevent heat from going outside. To sum up, we could say that the house works completely different in each climate and this is smart design in my opinion and most thing make astonished about is actually the house is energy-efficent. And thar is a great thing in my opinion.
This
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digram
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shows
a number of design principles for an energy-efficient
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house
and how they work in warm and
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cold
climates.

According to what
is shown
, in a warm climate the
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sun
shine fell on the roof
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but
it is
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reflect
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because
of a material that covering the whole roof. Then, you have an underground floor that
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retent
the
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heat
and the
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heat
flow outside.
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Also
we have insulation and that a material
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prevent
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heat
from passing through it. And
in this case
it
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prevent
the
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heat
from going inside.

While in
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cold
climate, the
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sun
light goes in and
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the it
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maximize
with
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heat
in triple-glazed.
“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
we have an underground floor
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sun
protection that to protect the floor from the
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sun
. And here
also
we have insulation
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but
in this case
it did not
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prevent
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heat
to go inside,
instead
it
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prevent
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heat
from going outside.

To sum up, we could say that the
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house
works completely
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different
in each climate and this is smart design in my opinion and most thing
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make
astonished about is actually the
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house
is
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energy-efficent
. And
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thar
is a great thing in my opinion.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows some design principles for an energy-efficient house and how they work in different climates.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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