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The diagram below shows one method of manufacturing ceramic pots.

The diagram below shows one method of manufacturing ceramic pots. JWmE

The stipulated process diagram outlines one particular way of creating ceramic pots. Basically, it is readily apparent that this chemical process would be grouped into three main stages, collecting the raw materials, forming those materials into pots, and finishing the process by heating and coloring them. Firstly, process begins with dig –up of raw material and transporting it to factories. Where second stage took place that is crushing of raw material with the help of machines. Mixing of crushing materials is done on third stage. After that, mixture is putted into the moulds with the help of pipes. Drying the mixture into the moulds approximately 4-6 hours they are ready to assembled into the clay pots. In the next stage, 1, 000 degree of Celsius temperature is used for heating the ceramic pots whereas try completion of that pots are ready for shifting towards another stage that coloring then by dipping into the bucket full of color. Last but not the least, firing machines are used sets the paint pigments in place, finalizing the hole processor. Overall, all the steps are inter-connect in the procedure of manufacturing of ceramic pots while, omission of any step would halt the whole process.

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 diagram outlines one particular way of creating ceramic pots.

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pots
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 sets the paint pigments in place, finalizing the hole processor.

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pots
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process
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