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A survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage

A survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage 50MN
The table given provides the data about people's opinion of media coverage of celebrities based on a particular survey. Overall, the majority of people think that celebrities news is publicized too much on media. There are 85% of the respondents agree that celebrities receive too much news coverage with 60% argue that such news is mostly shown on television and more than 50% think the news organisations should be responsible for the amount of coverage. In contrast, there is only five per cent of surveyed people claim that news of famous people come up on the radio without knowing the exact amount of the news coverage. In addition, 12% of the surveyed people state that headlines related to celebrity can be found in newspapers with the right amount of coverage, according to 7% of the surveyed participants. Meanwhile, a small proportion (6%) of people who take the poll responds that the entertainers are not having enough news coverage, especially on the internet news website. For this, the public must take a charge. The lowest percentage of participants admit that celebrities news is covered in other media, while 5% do not even know anything regarding this issue.
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people
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coverage
of
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celebrities
based on a particular survey.
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people
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think
that
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celebrities
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news
is publicized
too much on media.

There are 85% of the respondents
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agree
that
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celebrities
receive too much
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news
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coverage
with 60% argue that such
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news
is
mostly
shown on television and more than 50%
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think
the
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news
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organisations
should be responsible for the amount of
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coverage
.
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, there is
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only
five per cent of surveyed
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people
claim that
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news
of
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famous
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people
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come
up on the radio without knowing the exact amount of the
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news
coverage.

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, 12% of the surveyed
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people
state that headlines related to
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celebrity
can
be found
in newspapers with the right amount of
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coverage
, according to 7% of the surveyed participants. Meanwhile, a
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small
proportion (6%) of
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people
who take the poll responds that the entertainers are not having
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enough
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news
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coverage
,
especially
on the internet
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news
website. For this, the public
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must
take a charge. The lowest percentage of participants admit that
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celebrities
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news
is covered
in other media, while 5% do not even know anything regarding this issue.

IELTS academic A survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage

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  American English
3 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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