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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Erjb
This table illustrates the social and economical data of countries such as Canada, Japan, Peru and Zaire in the year of 1994 based on UN statistics. Overall, this information depicts Japan is in the highest position regarding annual income and life expectancy. Wherease, Canada stood on the top place on daily calorie supplying. Interstingly, both Canada and Japan hold the first place on adult literacy rate 99%. This table shows Japan scores dollars of 15760 on annual income per person and 78 life expectancy at birth. On the other hand, Zaire reached just130 on annual income and 47 on life expectancy. On the daily energy source supplying basis, Canada is the best country. Meanwhile, Japan stood behind Canada in this indicator. However, both Canada and Japan stood up just under the mere of 100 percentage. The saddest part is Zaire is the poorest country which is in the last place in all aspects. Though Peru not attained the first, it is trying to come up that is to be appreciated. To sum up, Japan and Canada is the best and Peru tries to be the best. On the contrary, Zaire is the poorest country based on all four aspects in 1994.
This table illustrates the social and economical data of
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, Peru and Zaire in the year of 1994 based on UN statistics.

Overall
, this information depicts
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Japan
is in the highest position regarding annual income and life expectancy.
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Wherease
, Canada stood on the top place on daily calorie supplying.
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Interstingly
, both Canada and
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hold the
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place on adult literacy rate 99%.

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scores dollars of 15760 on annual income per person and 78 life expectancy at birth.
On the other hand
, Zaire reached just130 on annual income and 47 on life expectancy. On the daily energy source supplying basis, Canada is the best
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. Meanwhile,
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Japan
stood behind Canada in this indicator.
However
, both Canada and
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Japan
stood up
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under the mere of 100 percentage. The saddest part is Zaire is the poorest
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which is in the last place in all aspects. Though Peru not attained the
first
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and Canada is the best and Peru tries to be the best.
On the contrary
, Zaire is the poorest
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based on all four aspects in 1994.
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IELTS academic The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics.

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