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The table displays information about the percentage of British unemployed how they spent their time in 14 activites in two times (morning and afternoon) in the last year.

The table displays information about the percentage of British unemployed how they spent their time in 14 activites in two times (morning and afternoon) in the last year. YR3Gr
The table displays information about the percentage of British unemployed how they spent their time in 14 activites in two times (morning and afternoon) in the last year. Generally, in the morning the majority of British female unemployed did a housework. The most of males hunted a job in the morning whereas just a few of them who drinking at the morning as well as British female activity. Following this data, in the morning, the majority of women did her housework by nearly a half (49%) whereas nearly one-fifth (19%) of man who did this. The most of male were job hunting accounted for 22% in the morning and 14% of them was gardening. While more than a quarter (26%) of women went to shopping and 16% of them searched a job. Only 8% of British male who still stayed in a bed in the morning as well as a women. Just a few of community in the both gender were played s sport and drinking were bellow than 5%. On the contrary, in the afternoon, the most of man who watching a television accounted by 14% whereas women who did this just 12%. The other activities which male did it such as job hunting, visiting friends, and gardening were made by 12%, 12%, and 13% respectively. However, the number of female who did a housework accounted 21% and others such as shopping, job hunting, and visiting relatives accouted by 17%, 13%, and again 17% respectively. The both of gender made bellow than 5% for staying in bed, visiting town, playing sport, and drinking.
The table displays information about the percentage of British unemployed how they spent their time in 14
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activites
in two times
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(morning
and afternoon) in the last year.

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, in the
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morning
the majority of British female unemployed did a housework. The most of
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males
hunted a
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job
in the
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morning
whereas
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just
a few of them
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who
drinking at the
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morning
as well
as British female activity.

Following this data, in the
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morning
, the majority of
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women
did her housework by
nearly
a half (49%) whereas
nearly
one-fifth (19%) of
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man
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who
did this. The
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most of male
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were
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job
hunting accounted for 22% in the
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morning
and 14% of them was gardening. While more than a quarter (26%) of
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women
went to shopping and 16% of them searched a
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job
.
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Only
8% of British male
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who
still
stayed in a bed in the
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morning
as well
as a
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women
.
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Just
a few of community in the both gender
were played
s sport and drinking were
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bellow
than 5%.

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, in the afternoon, the most of
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man
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who
watching a television accounted by 14% whereas
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women
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who
did this
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just
12%. The other activities which male did it such as
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job
hunting, visiting friends, and gardening
were made
by 12%, 12%, and 13%
respectively
.
However
, the number of female
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who
did a housework accounted 21%
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and others
such as shopping,
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job
hunting, and visiting relatives
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accouted
by 17%, 13%, and again 17%
respectively
. The both of gender made bellow than 5% for staying in bed, visiting town, playing sport, and drinking.
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