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pebbleton 20 years map task 1

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The yielded two diagrams provide the information about prior 20 year ago pebble ton to till the date. In generally, it is clearly observed by maps locations that five modifications were made to develop the pebble ton city. These involved the building of new community center, children playground, flats, tennis court and footpath. Getting back to the details from the visualization images that there was nothing changed in the east site of drawing as it showed merely in north to south and one on west side. Further, the ratio of residential land is escalating due to public sector which organizing social and cultural activities, along with this art-house, city demolished ancient fort to forged children’s playground for those offspring’s who live in the residential area. Moreover, it is noticeable that beside the lighthouse lane, there is tennis courts build, afterwards film studio was superseded by granny houses where it is constructed on the edges of the river. Also, a footpath is layout by following same direction to footbridge which was not occurred in 20 years earlier time.
The yielded two diagrams provide the information about prior 20 year ago pebble ton to till the date.

In
generally
, it is
clearly
observed by maps locations that five modifications
were made
to develop the pebble ton city. These involved the building of new community center, children playground, flats, tennis court and footpath.

Getting back to the
details
from the visualization images that there was nothing
changed
in the east site of drawing as it
showed
merely
in north to south and one on west side.
Further
, the ratio of residential land is escalating due to public sector which organizing social and cultural activities, along with this art-
house
, city demolished ancient fort to forged children’s playground for those offspring’s who
live
in the residential area.

Moreover
, it is noticeable that beside the lighthouse lane, there is tennis courts build, afterwards film studio
was superseded
by granny
houses
where it
is constructed
on the edges of the river.
Also
, a footpath is layout by following same direction to footbridge which was not occurred in 20 years earlier time.
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IELTS academic pebbleton 20 years map task 1

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  American English
4 paragraphs
177 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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