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The diagram below shows information about the eiffel tower and the Petronas tower.

The diagram below shows information about the eiffel tower and the Petronas tower. lqkxQ

The given table describes the data of two popular towers, the Eiffel tower and the Petronas towers. Overall, it can be easily seen that not only the Eiffel tower but also Petronas towers building is tallest in the world, when work completed. For comparison of both towers, Petronas towers is higher and bigger than Eiffel tower. The Petronas towers are located in Malaysia. It took 4 years for construction and in 1998 it was ready. In these towers have 88 floors and in 42nd floor it connects both tower. Concrete steel, aluminum, and glass were used for making it. However, the weight is 300000 tones and it is almost 1500 feet high m there have 78 lifts and for 1998 to 2004, these are the tallest building in whole world. The Eiffel tower is located in France. 2 years were taken for making it and in 1888 it was completely ready. There has 3 floors and wrought iron was used as materials in this building. Furthermore, the weight is 10000 tonnes with approx 1000 hight. Thus had world tallest building status between 1889 to 1930.

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