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Kevin Roose (2020) The Value of your humanity in an automated future

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Kevin Roose (2020) in his conversation called “The Value of your humanity in an automated future”, which is replaced by electronic machines, shared information about advantages and disadvantages about automated future. To begin with, Kevin explored about automated robots, and his point of view consists of that people have been preparing for automated future, which is significantly wrong. Based on the fact, that if hi-tech is the key of the future, people would be closer with them. Moreover, in the future will be more demanded exact sciences such as, math, engineering, and data science, where soft abilities, who is owned by artist, writers, and philosophers. However, from his findings, he discovered a new method to human work, where instead of technologies, it could be use humans and humans emotions, which is more realistic and funnier, Rus Garofalo is a vivid example, also Marcus Books, which is still working for 60 years. In conclusion, Kevin wants to convey to people, that technology is not always benefit for us, because robots can not feel emotions, as long as human can.
Kevin
Roose
(2020) in his conversation called “The Value of your humanity in an
automated
future”
, which
is replaced
by electronic machines, shared information about advantages and disadvantages about
automated
future
. To
begin
with, Kevin explored about
automated
robots, and his point of view consists of that
people
have been preparing for
automated
future
, which is
significantly
wrong
. Based on the fact, that if hi-tech is the key of the
future
,
people
would be closer with them.
Moreover
, in the
future
will be more demanded exact sciences such as, math, engineering, and data science, where soft abilities, who is
owned
by artist, writers, and philosophers.
However
, from his findings, he discovered a new method to
human
work, where
instead
of technologies, it could be
use
humans
and
humans
emotions, which is more realistic and funnier,
Rus
Garofalo
is a vivid example,
also
Marcus Books, which is
still
working for 60 years.

In conclusion
, Kevin wants to convey to
people
, that technology is not always benefit for us,
because
robots can not feel emotions, as long as
human
can.
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IELTS academic Kevin Roose (2020) The Value of your humanity in an automated future

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
178 words
5.5
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