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International tourism is now more common than ever.some people feel that this is positive trend, while others believe that it is negative development for host country.discuss both the views and give your opinion

International tourism is now more common than ever. some people feel that this is positive trend, while others believe that it is negative development for host country. discuss both the views and give your opinion Arbl1
In today’s modern era, international travelling easy to travel one country to another country. people get more facilities daring to travel therefore they are choose to traveling. In this trend some people believe that it’s behind advantage to travel and other side people accept that there are more disadvantages in tourism. I discuss both the views in my ensuing paragraphs and my relevant opinion drawn in conclusion.
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people
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get
more facilities daring to travel
therefore
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choose
to traveling. In this trend
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some
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people
believe that it’s behind advantage to travel and other side
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people
accept that there are more disadvantages in tourism. I discuss both the views in my ensuing paragraphs and my relevant opinion drawn
in conclusion
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IELTS academic International tourism is now more common than ever. some people feel that this is positive trend, while others believe that it is negative development for host country. discuss both the views and give your opinion

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
67 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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