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International tourism is now more common than ever.some people feel that this is positive trend, while others believe that it is negative development for host country.discuss both the views and give your opinion

International tourism is now more common than ever. some people feel that this is positive trend, while others believe that it is negative development for host country. discuss both the views and give your opinion Arbl1

In today’s modern era, international travelling easy to travel one country to another country. people get more facilities daring to travel therefore they are choose to traveling. In this trend some people believe that it’s behind advantage to travel and other side people accept that there are more disadvantages in tourism. I discuss both the views in my ensuing paragraphs and my relevant opinion drawn in conclusion.

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today
’s modern era, international travelling easy to travel one country to another country. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPeople
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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choose
 to traveling. In this trend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 believe that it’s behind advantage to travel and other side This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 accept that there are more disadvantages in tourism. I discuss both the views in my ensuing paragraphs and my relevant opinion drawn in conclusion
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IELTS academic International tourism is now more common than ever. some people feel that this is positive trend, while others believe that it is negative development for host country. discuss both the views and give your opinion

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

67 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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One main idea per paragraph
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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