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The diagram below shows how water is collected for domestically use in a town

The diagram below shows how water is collected for domestically use in a town q0m0X

The diagram gives information about the process of collecting rainwater to make it safe enough for home use in a town. Overall, at first, rainwater is gathered to pour down several drains of houses in the town then being filtered and experienced through stages to be drinkable. Initially, rainwater cascades down multiple rooftops and falls via drains in the town's drainage system, in which it descends and be cleansed by a water filter. At the next stage, after being filtered, the rainwater in the storage is sent to water treatment, where it is gently purify, using various chemicals to remove all dirt and bacteria until it is purified enough for human to drink. When the water is clean enough to use, it travels via pipes to taps in each houses in the town for consumption.

The diagram gives information about the process of collecting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
rainwater
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it safe This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 for home This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 in a town. Overall
, at first
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
rainwater
is gathered
 to pour down several drains of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 in the town then being filtered
 and experienced through stages to be drinkable.

Initially
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
rainwater
 cascades down multiple rooftops and falls via drains in the town's drainage system, in which it descends and be cleansed
 by a water filter.

At the next
 stage, after being filtered
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
rainwater
 in the storage is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to water treatment, where it is gently
Consider using a past participle here: "purified".purified
purify
, using various chemicals to remove all dirt and bacteria until it is purified
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 for human to drink. When the water is clean This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
, it travels via pipes to taps in each The noun should be probably in the singular form: "house"?house
houses
 in the town for consumption. 