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The three pie charts give information about the average proportion of Sodium, saturated fat, and Added Sugar in the typical meals of the USA. Excessive consumption of any of those nutrient is considered to negatively affect ones health. Overall, the first two meals of the day eaten by the USA are relatively balanced and healthy, whereas the dinner contains the most sodium and saturated fat. Most of the added sugar is in the snack foods. The first two meals of the day breakfast and lunch appear to be quite healthier and evenly distributed. A typical breakfast, is the lightest meal of the day between 14 and 16 percent of each nutrient. For lunch, people consume between 19 and 29 percent of the nutrients, with added sugar being the lowest and sodium being the highest. On the other hand, dinner and snacks appear to be less balanced. Out of all the meals, dinner contains the largest proportion of sodium and saturated fats with 43 and 37 % respectively. However, in snacking items, the people eat the most is added sugar(42 percent) and slight more in sodium and saturated fats than for breakfast.
The three pie charts give information about the average proportion of Sodium,
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saturated
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, and
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Added
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Sugar
in the typical
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meals
of the USA. Excessive consumption
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, the
first
two
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meals
of the day eaten by the USA are
relatively
balanced and healthy, whereas the dinner contains the most sodium and
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saturated
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fat
. Most of the
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added
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is in the snack foods.

The
first
two
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meals
of the day breakfast and lunch appear to be quite healthier and
evenly
distributed. A typical breakfast, is the lightest
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meal
of the day between 14 and 16 percent of each nutrient. For lunch,
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consume between 19 and 29 percent of the nutrients, with
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added
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sugar
being the lowest and sodium being the highest.

On the other hand
, dinner and snacks appear to be less balanced. Out of all the
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meals
, dinner contains the largest proportion of sodium and
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saturated
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with 43 and 37 %
respectively
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, in snacking items, the
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people
eat the most is
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sugar(42
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than for breakfast.
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