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Design a library for children including the colors for tables, shelves, walls, and area for reading

Design a library for children including the colors for tables, shelves, walls, and area for reading G913j
Books are an inexhaustible source of knowledge. That's why I decided to design a library. Beginning with wall, I think entering the room with the soft light color will make you feel comfortable and want to read, mellow gold is a suitable choice because if you use bright, clear colors like sunny yellow and bright orange it will encourage activity instead of inviting you to relax and read. I set area for reading at the quietest corner of the library with some windows to let the sunlight come in and lamps are the perfect way to bring some personality and function to your reading nook. The crucial parts of the library are tables and shelves. With shelves I will paint many colors divided by topic to inscrease creactivity for children and the tables I think the best choice is brown wood tables because it help you inscrease alertness when you sit and read book.
Books are an inexhaustible source of knowledge. That's why I decided to design a library. Beginning with wall, I
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you feel comfortable and want to read, mellow gold is a suitable choice
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colors like sunny yellow and bright orange it will encourage activity
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of inviting you to relax and read. I set area for reading at the quietest corner of the library with
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windows to
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in and lamps are the perfect way to bring
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personality and function to your reading nook. The crucial parts of the library are tables and shelves. With
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IELTS academic Design a library for children including the colors for tables, shelves, walls, and area for reading

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