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the diagram below shows how to make orange juice

the diagram below shows how to make orange juice 8x1Lk

the diagram indicates various steps of orange juice production. Overall, there are twelve main steps to make orange juice, beginning with fresh oranges and ending at being sold at supermarkets. In the first step, fresh oranges are conveyed to factory before being cleaned by washing. After that, these oranges are extracted into two parts, the solid waste is used for feeding cattle, and the other part- freshly filtered juice is separated into two groups of production. It is packaged into boxes and being sold at supermarkets. In the other group, fresh juice is kept cool and transferred by refrigerated truck to another house. At this point, it goes through the stage of evaporation to remove water with high temperature and leaving a concentrated orange juice, which is put into different cans. Following that, these containers is continued moving to warehouse before being added water at the factory. Finally, products are packaged to be sold at supermarket.

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 diagram indicates various steps of orange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 production.

Overall
, there are twelve main steps to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 orange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
, beginning with fresh oranges and ending at being sold
 at supermarkets.

In the first
 step, fresh oranges are conveyed
 to factory This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being cleaned
 by washing. After that, these oranges are extracted
 into two parts, the solid waste is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for feeding cattle, and the other part- freshly
 filtered You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
is separated
 into two groups of production. It is packaged
 into boxes and being sold
 at supermarkets.

In the other group, fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 cool and transferred by refrigerated truck to another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. At this point, it goes through the stage of evaporation to remove water with high temperature and leaving a concentrated orange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
, which is put
 into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 cans. Following that, these containers is continued
 moving to warehouse This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 water at the factory. Finally
, products are packaged
 to be sold
 at supermarket. 