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The charts depict information changes in ownership of washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner and number of hours spend by household per week. washing machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner usage showed an upward trend along with increasing years. washing machine usage was zero in 1920. then, it shoots up with 100% in 2000 and remains same in almost next two decade. washing machine also showed increasing usage with 60% in 1960. Despite one minor drop, it showed more than 50 % growth. The number of houses on household showed a downward trend. In 1920, most time is spent on work with 50 hours only. It falls, dropping by almost 40 hours in 1980 and remain plateau for two decades. After this, it reaches its lowest point at a mere 10 hours in 2019. over the period of time, people start using more appliances and spend less time in household work.
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spend by household per week.
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washing
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, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner usage
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an upward trend along with increasing years.
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washing
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usage was zero in 1920.
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washing
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also
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increasing usage with 60% in 1960. Despite one minor drop, it
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more than 50 % growth. The number of
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on household
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a downward trend. In 1920, most time
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. It falls, dropping by almost 40
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in 1980 and remain plateau for two decades. After this, it reaches its lowest point at a mere 10
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using more appliances and spend less time in household work.

IELTS academic char show about detail tahjauqjkiswloiwas hjagwghsawghjhqau jhuq2iuqyhjaqyh qhjahujquiqa hwsj

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