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The chart gives information about the percentage of people giving money organization in Britain.

The chart gives information about the percentage of people giving money organization in Britain. YyA8Q
The diagram shows the levels of charitable donations of people living in Britain, separated by age, between 1990 and 2010. Overall, there was a general decrease in the percentage of people who donated money over the two time periods. However, the pattern differs between the three age groups before 50 and the two age groups after the age of 50. The highest decrease was in the 18-25 category, which saw a decrease of 10%, from 17% in 1990 to 7% in 2010. 42% of people in the 36-50 age group gave to charity in 1990, the highest on the chart, and this fell to 35% in 2010. There was also a significant decline in donations among 26-35 years old, from 31% to 24%. The exception to this general trend downwards was among the 51-65 years old and over 65s. In 2010, the 51-65 years age group gave the highest percentage with nearly 40 percent and this rose from 35% in 1990. Finally, those over 65 displayed a slight percentage increase of 3 percent.
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the levels of charitable donations of
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living in Britain, separated by
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age
, between 1990 and 2010.

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, there was a general decrease in the percentage of
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people
who donated money over the two time periods.
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age
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groups
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before
50 and the two
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after the
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of 50.

The highest decrease was in the 18-25 category, which
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a decrease of 10%, from 17% in 1990 to 7% in 2010. 42% of
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people
in the 36-50
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gave to charity in 1990, the highest on the chart, and this fell to 35% in 2010. There was
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a significant decline in donations among 26-35 years
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, from 31% to 24%.

The exception to this general trend downwards was among the 51-65 years
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and over 65s. In 2010, the 51-65 years
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gave the highest percentage with
nearly
40 percent and this rose from 35% in 1990.
Finally
, those over 65 displayed a slight percentage increase of 3 percent.

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