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The table chart shows the number of visitors and the pie charts shiw tge resukts of surveys .

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The ostensible tabke chart details thw information about the entire figure of tourists prior and after reconstructing of Ashdown Museum and the given pie charts show the consequences of a survey, in which it compares the gratification of voyagers in both periods. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that thr number of visitors to that place was the highest after, its refurbishment, Whilst the satisfaction rate of travellers was varying onnthe basis of five types during before and after redevelopment. Having a clear glance, it can be seen that in previous time, the average number of guests was 74, 000 and that was uplifted by 18, 000 ( 92, 000) after, the demodernizing of Ashdown Museum. The pie charts reveal that in prior to, one tenth tourists were gratified but that satisfaction was decreased by 5% after, its reconstructing. Turning to the remaining information, during the year before refurbishment 5% travellers did not have any response and that was remained steady in next period but 15 % vogayers who were more satisfied, in previous year their number was jump and reached at more than one third (35%). In contrast, 40% visitors were dissatisfied and 30% were very dissatisfied and that was followed by after reconstructing stage with 15% and 40% respectively.
The ostensible
tabke
chart
details
thw
information about the entire figure of tourists prior and after reconstructing of
Ashdown
Museum and the
given
pie charts
show
the consequences of a survey, in which it compares the gratification of voyagers in both periods.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that
thr
number of visitors to that place was the highest after, its refurbishment, Whilst the satisfaction rate of
travellers
was varying
onnthe
basis of five types during
before
and after redevelopment.

Having a
clear
glance, it can be
seen
that in previous time, the average number of guests was 74, 000 and that
was uplifted
by 18, 000
(
92, 000) after, the
demodernizing
of
Ashdown
Museum. The pie charts reveal that in prior to, one tenth tourists
were gratified
but
that satisfaction
was decreased
by 5% after,
its
reconstructing.

Turning to the remaining information, during the year
before
refurbishment 5%
travellers
did not have any response and that
was remained
steady in
next
period
but
15 %
vogayers
who were more satisfied, in previous year their number was jump and reached at more than one third (35%).
In contrast
, 40% visitors
were dissatisfied
and 30% were
very
dissatisfied and that
was followed
by after reconstructing stage with 15% and 40%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The table chart shows the number of visitors and the pie charts shiw tge resukts of surveys.

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